The writing here is good, the characters are sort of stock but well drawn stock. The resolution of Court’s lifelong issues comes quickly. I was more believing that Maggie had moved past hers and was already in a mental place where she was ready to commit. The parts I enjoyed the most were the medical ones. I appreciate the work it looks like you went to in order to get all this correct. I could follow what’s going on without being lost in jargon or situations beyond my knowledge.